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Why would you do this?
You set me up to fall.
You gave me the fruit.
That tempted me.
The most delicious fruit,
And then you casted me from heaven,
And took away my love,
Then expect me to live with those memories?
That is the worst joke ever.
And the only true joke is you.
God why have you forsaken me?
:iconaionthesinner1:

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Same as the last one... but this is an anger one... at God sorry all you Church Fanatics.

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:icontake-all-of-me:
haha i was listening to you found me by the fray when i was reading this , it pretty much says the same thing
i think this it the part where im suppost to say dont lose faith, but if i said that i would be a hypocrite
anywho good job like always XD

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I wished to know the meaning of things. I am the meaning. I wished to find a warrent for being. I need no warrent for being, and no word of sanction upon my being. I am the warrant and the sanction.
Ayn Rand

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:iconaionthesinner1:
lol thanks

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I am Aion the sinner and may your soul be saved.
:iconamhprincess:
I can really relate to this one, it's very empowering. Nice job^^

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6 out of 7 dwarfs aren't happy.
:iconaionthesinner1:
Thanks ^^

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I am Aion the sinner and may your soul be saved.
:iconamhprincess:
Welcome :)

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6 out of 7 dwarfs aren't happy.
:iconaionthesinner1:
Have you checked out any of my other stuff?

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I am Aion the sinner and may your soul be saved.
:iconamhprincess:
Yes, you're a very talented writer!

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6 out of 7 dwarfs aren't happy.
:iconaionthesinner1:
>///< thank you

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I am Aion the sinner and may your soul be saved.
:iconamhprincess:
Anytime sweets!

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6 out of 7 dwarfs aren't happy.
:iconaionthesinner1:
*is still blushing* :)

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I am Aion the sinner and may your soul be saved.

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