Just some words on the paper. it isnt about any one so please no freaking out ^^ Thank you.
Hey guys. this is a poem i wrote because i remembered the loneliness i felt before i got my girl. Also i was listening to the song "The Bird and The Worm" by The Used. I want to know what you think of the tone, is it too dark or is it too light for this loneliness, and then the sudden change in the last line of the poem, is that too sudden, and just normal you know "I liked this" or "You could have done this" is welcome too.