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Following the Cheshire Cat by *aionthesinner1:iconaionthesinner1:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


Up, Down, Left, Right,
I don’t know which way to go.
You held my hand up till now.
Then like the Cheshire cat disappeared.
Leaving me here at this crossroad,
Not knowing what to do.
Down is Hell, Up is Heaven.
Left is a valley, so easy to fall.
Right is a mountain, so hard to climb.
Where did you go oh Cheshire cat?
Did you climb up that mountain so high?
Just to laugh down from above?
Did you fall into the valley so low?
That you don’t even know where to go?
Did you go up without me?
Living and laughing and just being happy?
Or did you go down?
To lead me into that fiery pit,
Oh Cheshire cat will I ever know just which way you went?
©2009 *aionthesinner1
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Well you know the drill same as the last two. this one uses a metaphore of the Cheshire cat.

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~take-all-of-me Jun 7, 2009, 2:19:05 PM
poor alice, you will find a sign i swear!

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I wished to know the meaning of things. I am the meaning. I wished to find a warrent for being. I need no warrent for being, and no word of sanction upon my being. I am the warrant and the sanction.
Ayn Rand

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*aionthesinner1 Jun 7, 2009, 7:54:22 PM
Hopefully.

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I am Aion the sinner and may your soul be saved.
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~take-all-of-me Jun 7, 2009, 8:47:39 PM
maby a white rabit will jump into your path

--
I wished to know the meaning of things. I am the meaning. I wished to find a warrent for being. I need no warrent for being, and no word of sanction upon my being. I am the warrant and the sanction.
Ayn Rand

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*aionthesinner1 Jun 8, 2009, 9:14:47 AM
Oh that was a good guy... I kinda shot him... He kept saying he was late so i was like... hmmm BUNNY IS GOOD. so i ate him...

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I am Aion the sinner and may your soul be saved.
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~take-all-of-me Jun 8, 2009, 1:12:57 PM
haha yummm did you at least cook him first?

--
I wished to know the meaning of things. I am the meaning. I wished to find a warrent for being. I need no warrent for being, and no word of sanction upon my being. I am the warrant and the sanction.
Ayn Rand

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*aionthesinner1 Jun 8, 2009, 2:52:25 PM
of course

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I am Aion the sinner and may your soul be saved.
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~take-all-of-me Jun 8, 2009, 2:54:26 PM
oh ok well then i guess you wont die of diseases

--
I wished to know the meaning of things. I am the meaning. I wished to find a warrent for being. I need no warrent for being, and no word of sanction upon my being. I am the warrant and the sanction.
Ayn Rand

avatar made by *XXMCR-DevotedXX
:iconaionthesinner1:
*aionthesinner1 Jun 8, 2009, 2:59:37 PM
Yep

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I am Aion the sinner and may your soul be saved.
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